sad melancholy song, probably about death

I started on the song trying to focus on transition between different parts like the verse and chorus, I am also working on the beat maker function to make better drum parts. I did everything myself, also, are the drums too loud I don’t think they are but they might be.


Questions: Does the transition work well and do the drums fit the rest of the song. Also is everything mixed well. Also should there be more instruments and parts for the beginning part

Feedback: Sounds Like Black sabbath (Tristan), little repetitive and drums a little to loud (michael). Bit more of a transition (Brenna)